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A rose for my thorns by ~SailorDarkStarr:iconSailorDarkStarr:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open




I rip my angel wings
fresh from my back
and throw them in the mud
so perfect and precious
are the pure white feathers
covered in blood and
slowly now in the dark black mud
it slightly reminds me of a rose
precious and pure
a rose symbolizes love and passion
yet thorns of pain and hatred
wait on the other side
shall this end in tears
for that might be best
give me back my wings
and let me fly away
with little memory of our rose
to which the thorns have much to say
©2004-2009 ~SailorDarkStarr
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Author's Comments

I wrote and dated this piece 12/11/02. I was having guy troubles. This guy changed the way I am and I didn't want it anymore, the relationship ended six months later, though everything became worse before it became better.

I really like using things that are symbolic so I used a rose and angel wings. They symbolize love and innocence. Well....have fun reading it, I hope you enjoy it.

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~blackballoon Aug 6, 2004, 10:26:59 PM
nice but in the title it says throns and i think you mean thorns aha

otherwise nice work :)

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~SailorDarkStarr Aug 6, 2004, 10:29:20 PM
teehee, thanks i always miss things like that....i'm on it right away!

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Human beings belong on the side of the light, but in moments of weakness their hearts are sometimes visited but a ray of darkness. The darkness grows quickly, like a cancer, which makes an excellent nestling place...for a demon.
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~Insecticide Aug 6, 2004, 10:31:36 PM
Nicely put. Well done. :nod:



Glad you're feeling better ;)

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Women are people, too.
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~SailorDarkStarr Aug 6, 2004, 10:34:51 PM
thank you, usually when i'm all emotional the words just come out and it's really nice to look back on and read. I'm working on getting more up soon, don't be shy....infact i was just over at your sight looking at your stuff i'll check back later

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Human beings belong on the side of the light, but in moments of weakness their hearts are sometimes visited but a ray of darkness. The darkness grows quickly, like a cancer, which makes an excellent nestling place...for a demon.
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~Insecticide Aug 6, 2004, 10:38:57 PM
You're welcome, hun. :hug:


I know exactly what you mean. That's a universal constant... Hehe. Have a good day. ;)

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Women are people, too.
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~SailorDarkStarr Aug 6, 2004, 10:44:36 PM
you too

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Human beings belong on the side of the light, but in moments of weakness their hearts are sometimes visited but a ray of darkness. The darkness grows quickly, like a cancer, which makes an excellent nestling place...for a demon.
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~kittykat102965 Aug 7, 2004, 4:59:08 AM
well done that a good poem!
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~SailorDarkStarr Aug 7, 2004, 5:30:54 PM
why, thank you i try...really i do!

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Human beings belong on the side of the light, but in moments of weakness their hearts are sometimes visited but a ray of darkness. The darkness grows quickly, like a cancer, which makes an excellent nestling place...for a demon.
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